Sunday, February 10, 2008

Cerebral Palsy


I was used to loneliness

and then things changed

It all started for fun

and then things changed

Calm and sanity were off springs

and then things changed

Jealousy and possession creped in

Now I want things to change

The question now floats in my cranium

Was I happy being sad ??

19 comments:

Keshi said...

there's a tinge of happiness in sadness...cos being sad is very REAL.

Keshi.

Anonymous said...

tujhe pyaar to ni ho gaya?
**i am in love..i am in love ..i am in love ..na na karte pyaar,main to kar gaya kar gaya,tune kiya jo yaad ,oye main mar gaya mar gaya ....** :P

oh on a serious note.. jealousy n possession are the result of something.they are not the cause..!!

waise on a totally serious note...

Darte darte afsaana-e-dil
Aaj unse hamne keh to diya
Yeh yaad nahin ghabraahat mein
Kya yaad raha, kya bhool gaye

--Nusrat fateh ali khan ji

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Keshi:
Can't agree more keshi :|

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Geet:
Got your hint Geet ! But it was more of a temporary mood swing I guess.....baaki, totally agree with your serious note and wah wah for your totally serious note :D

Anonymous said...

masti mein likha sab :P

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Masti mein sahi par "satya vachan satya vachan" :P

elusive said...
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Satanic Angel said...

happy being sad..most of us or rather i would say all of us have thatt thing somewhere in us..some strange obssession with sadness..not an obsession really, maybe being sad helps you in your catharsis of emotions.
and i blabber..

p.s. tat was me, i used a different account by mistake, so here it comes again..

Reeta Skeeter said...

Oye saddie! :P
Natak band kar
Be happeee :d

Pri said...

a few lines of my own (though they are much relevant to 'success' than 'emotions')

today i look at myself in the mirror,
with rich finery im clad...
but the creases on my forehead tell me,
that perhaps i was much more happier being sad...

cheers! :)

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Elusive:
Maybe it helps but I wish it wasn't true ! I wish I could be happy all the time, sounding like an idiot but just a wish !

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Skeety:
Jo hukum skeety ji :)

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Pri:
WOW ! Simply WOW !! Thanks for the lovely lines :)

Cane-an said...

Hello,
I just paused by your blog while surfing around.
Loved this poem...especially the last line.
Cheerio!

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Thanks Saurabh. Welcome and keep visiting :)

poetic soul said...

i always believed that less words leave a better impact and this is one of the best examples..
BRAVO!!

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Thanks, am glad that you liked it. Welcome and keep visiting :)

P said...

So much sewn in such a few words...marvellous!

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Thanks a lot, keep visiting :)