Tuesday, February 12, 2008

सवाल एक अस्तित्व का

नामुमकिन तो नही है
काटना यह पल
तन्हाई समेटे हुए
सारे जहाँ की
भीड़ के घेराव में भी
काटता कचोटता सूनापन
आवाजें भेद नही पाती अब
कानों की गहराइयां
हर मंज़र धुंधला है
यादों की धुंध तले
एक टीस उठती है
रह रह कर
चीखती चिल्लाती हुई
मानो कह रही हो
कब तक रहेगा तू
कब तक सहेगा तू

27 comments:

Reeta Skeeter said...

MF!

Reeta Skeeter said...

tere charan kahan hai ab?!
maza aa gaya wah wah!

crasiezt said...

So what's the answer? Kab tak sahega tu? Or do you not have an answer to that?

Pri said...

woww!
its very rare to find good hindi writers around here...
u r definitely one of them...
hats off!! :)

Gonecase said...

Skeety:
Mera dialog mujhe hi chipka diya, hehe !! Thank you hai :)

Gonecase said...

Crazy:
I don't have any answer to that :|
Aur kya sehna zaruri hai ??

Gonecase said...

Pri:
Dhanyawaad Doctor sahiba, darshan dete rahiyega :D

geet said...

kya baat hai.. wah bhayee wah!!

Reeta Skeeter said...

yesh :P

Gonecase said...

Geet:
Thank you ji :)

Gonecase said...

Skeety:
:P

crasiezt said...

Nope zaroori ni hai...you can simply ignore the feeling:P

But jokes apart...tussi chha gaye..ladkiyon ki line lagi padi hai tere blog pe:D

Rohit Tripathi said...

beautiful aur satya ke kareeb.

latest Post :Urgent vacancy for the post of Girl Friend…

Keshi said...

***looks baffled and wonders wut it all means***

Keshi.

Gonecase said...

Crazy:
Ab ladke to saare tune pakad rakhe hain, to bacha hi kya ! Moreover mujhe pakadne bhi nahi hain :P

And I wish I could ignore, I hate this feeling :|

Gonecase said...

Rohit:
Dhanywaad Tripathi Sahab and welcome here :)

Keshi said...

just replied to ya in my V-day post :)

Keshi.

Gonecase said...

Keshi:
Will try to translate and post, keep visiting :)

Gonecase said...

Keshi:
You've got yourself a reply too :D

crasiezt said...

Kisko pakadna hai tune phir;-)

Gonecase said...

Abbe ladkiyon se hi khush hun mein...ye ladko se door hi rakho mujhe :P

crasiezt said...

Ladkiyan?????Grrrrrrrrrrr

Gonecase said...

Kyon, 'ladkiyon' mein kya kharabi hai ???

crasiezt said...

No comments smartie:-(

Gonecase said...

I knew you wouldn't argue over that ULF ;-)

umangexuberance said...

I had no idea you wrote so beautifully in Hindi as well.. this was wow :)

#queen bee#

Gonecase said...

Arre thanku thanku :)
Baaki its not about the language you use, its the way you think. Keep buzzing madhumakkhi :P