With that hurt, that pain
you left me insane
love no longer matters
when you left unsaid
Gloomy are the days
lonely are the nights
world no longer matters
when you left unsaid
You left me to die
and I pine for you
matter no longer matters
when you left unsaid
Tuesday, October 23, 2007
Left Unsaid
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Good work..poignant, heart-aching. Just wondering how you write about stuff that you've never experienced! The picture is beautiful too..lovely colours and stuff!
Darn, tune to raaz khol diya :P. I write the same way as you wrote this beautiful comment even though you didn't like it !
matter no long matters...sahi!!!
But you are a gonecase as I have been saying...sudhar ja! Kuch cheery likhna next :)
Happy Blogging!
Thank you for the kind words sucker:P I genuinely liked it, just that your previous posts were nicer!
Reeta ji:hehe,bachpan se hi aisa hun :P
Crazy:Sucker, chee chee, kaisi bhasha ka prayog karti hai, hehe :P
So you liked it, hmmm, thank u thank u :D
Ye Reeta ji kaahe laga rakha hai?! Jisko dekho wo mujhe Reeta ji address karta/karti hai...Not that I mind it... but what is the funda behind the ji ji? Roshni daalein pliss!
"matter no longer matters" .. sahi hai yaar.. nice one.. bt well,i feel it's not necessary to experience alwaz... u see, it's all about thot process...
aur mera thot process toh mashallah hai waise bhi.. main kya kisi ko bol raha hoon :)
nice one dude.. really really liked it... touched completely...
keep blogging
Reeta ji-hehehe, okie, Reeta, ji ka upyog kiya jata hai izzat dene ke liye, hehe. I know budhhe budhhe jaisi feel aati hai, atleast mujhe to aati hai, won't use it from now on :D
Rohit sir, I am glad that you liked it. It was more of a timepass attempt than a genuine effort
janaab agar yeh timepass effort tha,toh phir i m speechless ;)
aur 'sir' mat laga yaar... maana that m experienced ENUF :), but still lots to see and experience.. :)
Mujhe bhi aati budhi jaisi feel...seems saara blogworld mujhe reetaji bana ra hai :( pata ni kya chakkar hai..anyway let us bury it!
Rohit:Bilkul janaab, no sir from here on :D
Reeta: Saara shehar err blogworld mujhe lion err reetaji ke naam se jaanta hai, hehe
short, but conveys a lot. I wish if all of us knew how important it is to talk.
best!
Thanks kulpreet, keep visiting :)
I didnt get the "matter no longer matters". wouldnt it have been better if you had said "no longer matters"? the meaning would remain the same.
There is a difference of meaning here. Removing matter would have meant, it doesn't matter that you left unsaid while what I was trying to say was nothing matters now.Btw, its always a pleasure to read your review, keep visiting :)
wot is aiyooo? and who is talking about coffee? i was talking about hot choc :P
Whoa, that was quick.Aiyoo, hehehe, that's opening to the script south ishtyle ! And yes, but my point over there was I prefer cool drinks :P
I know tabhi to pucha aiyooo kyun likh ra hai... you are adapting quite well :P Cool drinks ajkal meri band hain :(
Nahi nahi, nothing of that sorts,aise hi feel le raha tha :P aur tujhe kya hua, cold ya gala kharab,abhi to winters shuru bhi nahi hui ?
cold + gala kharab + fever :(
Sardi khansi na maleria hua, skeeter gyi yaaro usko...hmmm, I don't know kya hua, hehe..weather is changing, take care of yourself :)
who left what unsaid?
Are you giving some cryptic clues about unknown side of yours?
As far as I know you don't care about unsaid and unknown?
lovely..yet sad
and i am back :D :D
I like the even-ness of the poem..if that word exists ..lol
Chacha: Tum bond ho chacha, asli ke bond. You know it right, I don't care about said and known either :P
Umang: Aaiye aaiye and thanks, its my Maggi "2 min" write :D but yours was definitely better :-)
Priya-Thanks, am glad that you liked something about this poem, hehe...words are meant to be created by humans, if this one doesn't exist, get ready for Nobel prize for literature..lol
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