Solitude has been my companion
Today I am afraid of being alone
I've been living this twisted life
Today I am afraid of being torn
Hurt was the way of living
Today I am afraid of this pain
I've been fighting this insanity
Today I am afraid of being sane
Wednesday, October 10, 2007
Alone I bleed
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Horrifying image! But lovely shayari dost:-)
Wow!
Moved...
Crazy-Thank you dost :-)
I have to use image that goes with the write, can't help it. I could have used your picture but that would have lead to antisocial elements visiting my "sundar susheel" blog :P
Kulpreet-Honoured
Seems truth of bachelors who are single and striving hard.
In this career marathon, somewhere inside we all feel same.The word "Solitude" moved me most.Towards end of this marathon most among us are left with 'Solitude'.
nice one sir... i do understand the feel of it.
:wow:
simple yet so deep...
honest yet so sublime...
just loved this one
please please SiDDharth ab to give me a membership in your fan club :)
Hope-Its all about perceptions. What you infer out of something depends upon your view to it.Keep visiting :D
Drunkfunk-Thank you bhai, I do understand why you understand the feel. Don't worry, everything will be fine, all the best.
Umang-Thank you very much,I am glad that you liked it.
Fan club, hehe, am still not worth it.
P.S.-You were up till 3:18 ??
thanx bro...
Aila please don't use my pic..I don't think yu'll be able to handle the attention:P
few words to explain how fuck'd up life can be at times, when you feel that you are ALL ALONE.. pic's awesome... actually, somehw i felt that it goes well with ur retro feel template :)
i take 2 pages to probably portray the same feelings.. i really gotta learn a few things from you :).. beautifully written..
keep blogging, keep rocking!
I love the last couplet.I strongly believe that a lot can be expressed in very few words if you choose the right words.You have done the same...
Crazy- Aila, hehehe.Meri majaal jo mein aapki pic laga dun :P
Rohit-Thanks for the kind words.Its just frustration instead of deliberate effort.
Priya-True indeed. Thanks :)
ya i am nocturnal :D
waise aj kal i am usually up till 5 in the morning and then attend college from 8:30 on..college fest is coming n i don't even have time to eat :( :( :(
Great! We used to play tennis whole night and then sleep during the class :D
Reminded me of good ol' fun days.Moreover, fests are always fun, high on energy, high on enjoyment but you need to take care of your health too!
well,not to say so,bt creativity at times is due to frustration only :).. hope ur frustration would be gone soon,bt keep up the creativity, i need to learn a lot. will tk into consideration wht u told me.thanks again..
Ab main kya kahun... likhte to acha ho... par fotu :( Stop it! Will ya?
i am not afraid of being torn, i am not afraid of being alone, (may be) i have become so insane, that i don't now feel no pain...
haha.. this is called bullshiting with all the copy rights.... we Indians are gifted from birth in that department.
Rohit-Thanks and welcome. I don't know much about poetry.I just suggested what I felt after reading. Keep up the good work.
Teri majaal ka toh mujhe pata hai:P
Reeta ji, thanku thanku hai pehle to. About foto, I use those which go with what I write. Ab mein likhta hi aisi bakwaas hun to pics bhi bakwaas hi hoti hain
Chacha-Jahan na pahunche ravi, wahan pahunche chacha, err, kavi :D
Aur isiliye to tum bharat ki shaan ho :P
Crazy-hehe, tanik vistaarpoorvak bataiye :P
read smthng my-mind-like after a long time...too good !
well chosen picture...
great !
read smthng my-mind-like after a long time...too good !
well chosen picture...
great !
Thanks,am glad that you find it worth that.
Vistaarpurvak?? Uff! you want details all the time!!
Life ka maza details mein hi hai :P
You want details huh? Deal! But I'll choose the time and place:D
Alright, let's see how detailed its going to get :D
Hahaha..yeah swthrt you'll see:P
well the fest is finally over PHEW!!!
and now that i am back to having nothing to do..suddenly i feel so empty :(
Emptiness gives an opportunity to start afresh, a blank canvas to paint the way you want to, the way you like it.Time to get your creative juices flowing talented lady :-)
hehe
encouraging words sid..
hope i can come up with something to live upto that title :D
I am vrey well aware of your capabilities and talent, hehe, nice comeback writes :)
hmm...this is one of your better ones...but can you talk of anyting else than pain? I mean there is more to life than that
Thanks.I agree there is more to life but pain fascinates me(Now don't think that I am psycho, I'm absolutely normal).I tried writing about other things too(eg.Ringtones, Nepenthes).
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