Wednesday, October 10, 2007

Alone I bleed


Solitude has been my companion
Today I am afraid of being alone

I've been living this twisted life
Today I am afraid of being torn

Hurt was the way of living
Today I am afraid of this pain

I've been fighting this insanity
Today I am afraid of being sane

40 comments:

crasiezt said...

Horrifying image! But lovely shayari dost:-)

Kulpreet said...

Wow!
Moved...

Gonecase said...

Crazy-Thank you dost :-)
I have to use image that goes with the write, can't help it. I could have used your picture but that would have lead to antisocial elements visiting my "sundar susheel" blog :P

Gonecase said...

Kulpreet-Honoured

Hope said...

Seems truth of bachelors who are single and striving hard.
In this career marathon, somewhere inside we all feel same.The word "Solitude" moved me most.Towards end of this marathon most among us are left with 'Solitude'.

DrunkFunk said...

nice one sir... i do understand the feel of it.

umangexuberance said...

:wow:
simple yet so deep...
honest yet so sublime...

just loved this one

please please SiDDharth ab to give me a membership in your fan club :)

Gonecase said...

Hope-Its all about perceptions. What you infer out of something depends upon your view to it.Keep visiting :D

Gonecase said...

Drunkfunk-Thank you bhai, I do understand why you understand the feel. Don't worry, everything will be fine, all the best.

Gonecase said...

Umang-Thank you very much,I am glad that you liked it.
Fan club, hehe, am still not worth it.

P.S.-You were up till 3:18 ??

DrunkFunk said...

thanx bro...

crasiezt said...

Aila please don't use my pic..I don't think yu'll be able to handle the attention:P

Rohit Jain (felon) said...

few words to explain how fuck'd up life can be at times, when you feel that you are ALL ALONE.. pic's awesome... actually, somehw i felt that it goes well with ur retro feel template :)

i take 2 pages to probably portray the same feelings.. i really gotta learn a few things from you :).. beautifully written..
keep blogging, keep rocking!

Priya said...

I love the last couplet.I strongly believe that a lot can be expressed in very few words if you choose the right words.You have done the same...

Gonecase said...

Crazy- Aila, hehehe.Meri majaal jo mein aapki pic laga dun :P

Rohit-Thanks for the kind words.Its just frustration instead of deliberate effort.

Priya-True indeed. Thanks :)

umangexuberance said...

ya i am nocturnal :D
waise aj kal i am usually up till 5 in the morning and then attend college from 8:30 on..college fest is coming n i don't even have time to eat :( :( :(

Gonecase said...

Great! We used to play tennis whole night and then sleep during the class :D
Reminded me of good ol' fun days.Moreover, fests are always fun, high on energy, high on enjoyment but you need to take care of your health too!

Rohit Jain (felon) said...

well,not to say so,bt creativity at times is due to frustration only :).. hope ur frustration would be gone soon,bt keep up the creativity, i need to learn a lot. will tk into consideration wht u told me.thanks again..

Reeta Skeeter said...

Ab main kya kahun... likhte to acha ho... par fotu :( Stop it! Will ya?

chacha said...

i am not afraid of being torn, i am not afraid of being alone, (may be) i have become so insane, that i don't now feel no pain...

haha.. this is called bullshiting with all the copy rights.... we Indians are gifted from birth in that department.

crasiezt said...
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Gonecase said...

Rohit-Thanks and welcome. I don't know much about poetry.I just suggested what I felt after reading. Keep up the good work.

crasiezt said...

Teri majaal ka toh mujhe pata hai:P

Gonecase said...

Reeta ji, thanku thanku hai pehle to. About foto, I use those which go with what I write. Ab mein likhta hi aisi bakwaas hun to pics bhi bakwaas hi hoti hain

Gonecase said...

Chacha-Jahan na pahunche ravi, wahan pahunche chacha, err, kavi :D
Aur isiliye to tum bharat ki shaan ho :P

Gonecase said...

Crazy-hehe, tanik vistaarpoorvak bataiye :P

Rashi said...

read smthng my-mind-like after a long time...too good !

well chosen picture...

great !

Rashi said...

read smthng my-mind-like after a long time...too good !

well chosen picture...

great !

Gonecase said...

Thanks,am glad that you find it worth that.

crasiezt said...

Vistaarpurvak?? Uff! you want details all the time!!

Gonecase said...

Life ka maza details mein hi hai :P

crasiezt said...

You want details huh? Deal! But I'll choose the time and place:D

Gonecase said...

Alright, let's see how detailed its going to get :D

crasiezt said...

Hahaha..yeah swthrt you'll see:P

umangexuberance said...

well the fest is finally over PHEW!!!
and now that i am back to having nothing to do..suddenly i feel so empty :(

Gonecase said...

Emptiness gives an opportunity to start afresh, a blank canvas to paint the way you want to, the way you like it.Time to get your creative juices flowing talented lady :-)

umangexuberance said...

hehe
encouraging words sid..
hope i can come up with something to live upto that title :D

Gonecase said...

I am vrey well aware of your capabilities and talent, hehe, nice comeback writes :)

Moulding defragmentation said...

hmm...this is one of your better ones...but can you talk of anyting else than pain? I mean there is more to life than that

Gonecase said...

Thanks.I agree there is more to life but pain fascinates me(Now don't think that I am psycho, I'm absolutely normal).I tried writing about other things too(eg.Ringtones, Nepenthes).