The ticks of the clock
The screech of the chalk
The odd-man of flock
The final knock
This question this time
This yearning this crime
This ache at its prime
This life is a mime
Friday, March 21, 2008
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"That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons even death may die."
32 comments:
wooow GC...amazing words...
simply loved it...
yeah life is < sigh >
"Screech of the chalk"
Awe inspiring line that is!
Sorry dimag kaam ni kar raha hai abhi..tequila having its effect on my little brain right now! But cheers to you, your poem and life in general:D
By the way Mmmmmmuah!
Oh I mean a combination of Tequila and a pomegranate and passion fruit cocktail (I think it had gin or/and vodka)...I know I've lost it..but I'm loving every moment of it...LOL
Chal picture dekhte hain ab:P
Nice rhyming there...
yes this life is definitely a MIME. And the curtains shall close sooner or later.
Well-written GC, loved it!
Keshi.
Rashi:
Thanks Rashi
Crazy:
Micheal ki bachhi, daaru peeke danga karti hai :P
Thanks waise, I'm happy ki tujhe pasand aayi :D
Skeety:
Thanks :)
Soch rha hun bhojpuri picture ke gaane likhna shuru kar dun :P
Keshi:
Thanks a lot :)
A mordern version of "All the world's a stage" lol!
Yes, this life's a mime,
But it sure gives us a chance to rhyme ;)
P.S. Wasn't the screen RED a few seconds ago? :O
Indeed, but only if some one cares (or dares) to listen to your rhyme, hehe. Thanks for visiting :D
As for PS, you were caught in my blog template changing spree ;)
screech of the chalk, havent experienced that for long, when do you get into such sorta situations?
Nice color this time ladke... black i like more... mai bhi apni white and white template ka kabhi to kuchch karunga tips de diyo...
Saaaaaax template hai!!
BTW danga kab aur kahan kiya maine? Dil khush kar ditta si tera...danga kab kiya saale??
one avid blogger dude!!
keep up the good work. will be coming by to read your stuff.
oh BTW i wrote something about Gone case too, but in a different light altogether.
enjoy
good luck
Chacha:
Its not necessary that I always write what happens to me or what I experience, facts and fiction combined...kal ko rape par kuch likh diya to tum to galat matlab nikal loge !
As for color, black is my favorite color too....blog ka pehla color black hi tha...aur mein aur AAPKO tips, aap bond ho chacha, meri kya aukaat aapke saamne !!
Crazy:
Thanks ji....aur dange se mera matlab tha jo yahan blog par comments kiye, three..back to back....aur waise maine kab kaha ki khush nahi kiya ??
Nextdoor Guy:
Thanks for dropping by man, will meet your Gone case too. Keep visiting :)
Aise hi...felt like spamming you:P
Keh kar to dekh ki khush ni kiya...grrrr
oye..me back.. coming out of depresion dheere dheere :)...
yaar tu to sahi poet hai...each line has a big meaning in it...
and template sahi daali hai..it goes well with the quote under GONECASE.
heylo mr sidu aka gonecase!!
cudnt resist telling u dat ur comment on nehaz new post is damn funny!! ;)
btw awesome template! whr did u get it from?
Geet:
Aaiye aaiye...ye to badi khushi ki baat hai ki aapki akkal finally thikane pe aa rhi hai firse :)
Thanks very much, its good to know that you liked the post and the template....par mein koi poet nahi hun, ye to sab bakwaas hai !!
Gunj:
Thanks :)
There are so many sites for templates..I'll provide the URLs if you want, meanwhile you can check finalsense.com
Thanks once again for dropping by and welcome :)
And that is a good rhyme. :)
Thanks and welcome :)
its amazing how a bunch of rhyming lines can make soo much sense sometimes :)
Pri:
Thanks :)
heyaa
uv been tagged :)
cheers
Hey, thanks for the honour, will do :)
Well written...could sense quite a bit of pain tho in ur blog posts..maybe just my imagination..keep bloggin! :)
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