Friday, March 21, 2008

Turmoil


The ticks of the clock

The screech of the chalk

The odd-man of flock

The final knock

This question this time

This yearning this crime

This ache at its prime

This life is a mime

32 comments:

Rashi said...

wooow GC...amazing words...
simply loved it...

yeah life is < sigh >

crasiezt said...

"Screech of the chalk"
Awe inspiring line that is!

Sorry dimag kaam ni kar raha hai abhi..tequila having its effect on my little brain right now! But cheers to you, your poem and life in general:D

crasiezt said...

By the way Mmmmmmuah!

crasiezt said...

Oh I mean a combination of Tequila and a pomegranate and passion fruit cocktail (I think it had gin or/and vodka)...I know I've lost it..but I'm loving every moment of it...LOL

Chal picture dekhte hain ab:P

Reeta Skeeter said...

Nice rhyming there...

Keshi said...

yes this life is definitely a MIME. And the curtains shall close sooner or later.

Well-written GC, loved it!

Keshi.

Gonecase said...

Rashi:
Thanks Rashi

Gonecase said...

Crazy:
Micheal ki bachhi, daaru peeke danga karti hai :P
Thanks waise, I'm happy ki tujhe pasand aayi :D

Gonecase said...

Skeety:
Thanks :)
Soch rha hun bhojpuri picture ke gaane likhna shuru kar dun :P

Gonecase said...

Keshi:
Thanks a lot :)

Macadamia The Nut said...

A mordern version of "All the world's a stage" lol!

Yes, this life's a mime,
But it sure gives us a chance to rhyme ;)

Macadamia The Nut said...

P.S. Wasn't the screen RED a few seconds ago? :O

Gonecase said...

Indeed, but only if some one cares (or dares) to listen to your rhyme, hehe. Thanks for visiting :D

As for PS, you were caught in my blog template changing spree ;)

chacha said...

screech of the chalk, havent experienced that for long, when do you get into such sorta situations?

Nice color this time ladke... black i like more... mai bhi apni white and white template ka kabhi to kuchch karunga tips de diyo...

crasiezt said...

Saaaaaax template hai!!

BTW danga kab aur kahan kiya maine? Dil khush kar ditta si tera...danga kab kiya saale??

Friendly nextdoor guy said...

one avid blogger dude!!
keep up the good work. will be coming by to read your stuff.
oh BTW i wrote something about Gone case too, but in a different light altogether.
enjoy
good luck

Gonecase said...

Chacha:
Its not necessary that I always write what happens to me or what I experience, facts and fiction combined...kal ko rape par kuch likh diya to tum to galat matlab nikal loge !
As for color, black is my favorite color too....blog ka pehla color black hi tha...aur mein aur AAPKO tips, aap bond ho chacha, meri kya aukaat aapke saamne !!

Gonecase said...

Crazy:
Thanks ji....aur dange se mera matlab tha jo yahan blog par comments kiye, three..back to back....aur waise maine kab kaha ki khush nahi kiya ??

Gonecase said...

Nextdoor Guy:
Thanks for dropping by man, will meet your Gone case too. Keep visiting :)

crasiezt said...

Aise hi...felt like spamming you:P
Keh kar to dekh ki khush ni kiya...grrrr

geet said...

oye..me back.. coming out of depresion dheere dheere :)...

yaar tu to sahi poet hai...each line has a big meaning in it...

and template sahi daali hai..it goes well with the quote under GONECASE.

gunj said...

heylo mr sidu aka gonecase!!
cudnt resist telling u dat ur comment on nehaz new post is damn funny!! ;)

gunj said...

btw awesome template! whr did u get it from?

Gonecase said...

Geet:
Aaiye aaiye...ye to badi khushi ki baat hai ki aapki akkal finally thikane pe aa rhi hai firse :)
Thanks very much, its good to know that you liked the post and the template....par mein koi poet nahi hun, ye to sab bakwaas hai !!

Gonecase said...

Gunj:
Thanks :)
There are so many sites for templates..I'll provide the URLs if you want, meanwhile you can check finalsense.com

Thanks once again for dropping by and welcome :)

Solitaire said...

And that is a good rhyme. :)

Gonecase said...

Thanks and welcome :)

Pri said...

its amazing how a bunch of rhyming lines can make soo much sense sometimes :)

Gonecase said...

Pri:
Thanks :)

Aditi ''Jiggs'' said...

heyaa

uv been tagged :)

cheers

Gonecase said...

Hey, thanks for the honour, will do :)

Cecilia said...

Well written...could sense quite a bit of pain tho in ur blog posts..maybe just my imagination..keep bloggin! :)