Thursday, December 6, 2007

I don't have a title for this


Two demons dwell in me

satisfaction and sanity

blabbering aloud

impiously irreverent

blasphemous profanity

Satisfaction leads to peace

sanity is road to

materialistic vanity

What will it take

to fill this abyss

but one thing I know

I won't leave my fate

in the hands of uncertainty

16 comments:

Reeta Skeeter said...

sanity is road to
materialistic vanity

ahem ahem... nice...
:)
Inna socha mat kar chore...Karam karo karam :P

crasiezt said...

Alle baby itna frustru mat ho..lovely read but get out of this phase jaldi jaldi..Picture is as awesome as always:-)

It's good that you're thinking this way though..but thinking is not enough dude, do something too..vaise I'm sure you're on the right track:-)Good luck..and am there as well..you'll get all the help needed:D

Gonecase said...

@Skeety- Thank you ji. Baaki sochne mein koi mehnat ni karni hoti, karam mein karni padti hai, hehe. On a serious note, I am now, atleast pretending to, let's see how fruitful it becomes :-)

Gonecase said...

:-) The more I read, the more broader it became, thank you very very much for all the support.
Baaki to see what happens, am not even thinking about the outcome now.
"one who struggles is better than one who never attempts"

crasiezt said...

Thanks not needed darling..just get me some green apple flavoured vodka:P
Loved the quote totally and completely..cha gaya koi:P And outcome ka kya hai..as long as you enjoy the process..wot say;-)

Gonecase said...

Vodka is waiting madam :D and agree that as long as you enjoy process, its good but if the outcome is also good, to fir baat hi kya hai :D

crasiezt said...

Toh sahi hai..aaj raat ko ho jaaye phir??hehehe..I meant daaru party:P

I assure you both the process and "outcome" will be awesome:D

Rashi said...

loved the last two lines dude...

I am so very motivated...neither will I leave my fate in her hands...nooo

u rock !

chacha said...

Amen.. may this spirit never dies, everything else will fall in place.

Rohit Jain (felon) said...

destiny is written 50% by god, the basic frame work is already created.... rest is left to us.. how we think, wht we do, and how we do it...

nice write... keep up the spirit... but very imp to know wht ur mind and heart speaks...

Kulpreet said...

sanity is road to

materialistic vanity

Wow!

Also loved the picture.

umangexuberance said...

beautiful as ever..u rule sid :)

and i love the end..yes, don't let the demons tear u apart...and sometimes just let things work themselves out..don't think so much about it :)

Gonecase said...

Crazy: Lets see how well you stick to your words :D

Rashi: Thanks for the honour. I'm glad that my write is of some worth
:-)

Chacha: Amen !!

Rohit: Thanks man.

Kulpreet: Thanks very much sir

Umang:The thinking phase is over, its time to do something. Just pray that this phase stays. And thanks :-)

crasiezt said...

Do I not always?? At least in this matter I'm sure I do baby:P

Rohit Jain (felon) said...

Well, i just hope that whatever you are doing, would yield good results for you..

Besta luck.. thou i'd alwaz say that there are a few thots which seem to be right, but aren't. so be practical in taking decisions..

Gonecase said...

Crazy: hehehe, ofcourse :P

Rohit: Ji sarkaar, thanks :-)