Thursday, December 27, 2007

Tranquility


A matchstick stroke

A puff disappearing

Dissolving slowly

in the air

Losing existence

taking something

along with

Long weak threads

Linking life

and beyond

A dot of fire

dazing and fazing

gorging on time

Bitterness inhaled

Life exhaled

46 comments:

Reeta Skeeter said...

This is your best post till date...
sends the message out...loud and clear! Taaliyan!
oh and yeah... MF!

crasiezt said...

Phoonk phoonk phoonk de re phoonk de re..hehehe..that is exactly what you're trying to advocate against..but shameless pigs like me don't ever get the point, do they?
As always, loved the post. Loved the style. Loved the end.."Bitterness inhaled..life exhaled" Awesome. Killer end. Totally inspiring!

umang said...

amazing picture and an even better poem to go with it
gonecase ji ab to entry de hi dijiye apne prestigious fan club me entry humein :)

kudos u rock!!

#umang# :)

umangexuberance said...

by the way it was just "smoking" ;) :P :P

Gonecase said...

Skeety:
Oh ! thank you, am honoured :-)

Gonecase said...

Crazy:
Thank you so much and inspiring, I wish it was :|

Gonecase said...

Umang:
Thank you ji and fan club, kyon maze leti hai, fan club to tera hona chahiye, mein is layak kahan

crasiezt said...

Inspiring maane you're inspiring me towards the poetic world baby:D What were you hoping for eh?

Gonecase said...

Aah, that way! I thought it was about leaving the stick and so, hopeless situation. But yahan to context hi doosra tha. Chalo fir to I'm honoured by this statement of yours. But what I really wanted was what I thought first :|

chacha said...

i never imagined you will write on this too

crasiezt said...

I know what you want, and you know my response too darling..toh what's the point in pursuing something that you'll never achieve? Come out of your utopian state..this is how it's gonna be..suttebaaz bewdi me is here to stay:D

Gonecase said...

Chacha:
Seems it came as a shock to you

Gonecase said...

Crazy:
Am I even trying, naah ! And that is why I said hopeless situation. Desi bhasha mein bole to, mein usse hi bolta hun jise bolne ka kuch fayda ho

crasiezt said...

You seem pissed mister..the situation isn't all that bad, you know that. Phir gham kahe ka jaani?

Gonecase said...

Pissed, not at all and am sorry if I made it sound that way. I know that situation isn't that bad and am happy about it.

crasiezt said...

Then am happy too:D

Gonecase said...

Aila ! Ye kahan se aaya :P
Aapki khushi mein hi hamari khushi hai ji, hehehe

chacha said...

GC:Yeah kind of surprised, but anyways, agree with most what exactly u mean by "bitterness inhaled"? pointing to the taste itself (nicotine) or sth else?

and what does it take it with itself dear
"taking something
along with"
.. the game it plays with yr mind, the fool it make it out of yrself more than compensate
"khushfahmi mein hi khushi hai, to khushfahmi sahi"

butterfly said...

Great reads here. Enjoyed reading ur poetry.

crasiezt said...

Cheesy corny line that was:P

Supriya Narang said...

Bitterness inhaled

Life exhaled

:) and still they say life's beautiful :)You write amazingly well!! take me in ur fan club too,... please please!!

Gonecase said...

Chacha:
Wo to mujhe pata hi tha ki teri taraf se advocacy hi honi hai.
Second, taking something alongwith refers to taking minutes out of your life.

Gonecase said...

Butterfly:
Welcome, thanks and keep visiting :-)

Gonecase said...

Crazy:
Bus ji seekh rahe hain, tips and tricks of the trade :P

Gonecase said...

Soup:
Oh ! Thank you very much for the honour, keep visiting. And fan club, hehe, am not worth it

chacha said...

nope i was not advocating, just wanted to know what you are worried about most, some minute of your life (as you said), lack of control on you, the reason for which you are smoking OR what?

just curious to know :D

though, it would not be right for me to say against too, "don't preach what you cannot follow" my policy

Gonecase said...

Hehehe, got your policy and point sir. And about worrying, neither of them because its not applicable to me :P

crasiezt said...

Seekhne ko bacha kya hai??? You were born corny my love:D

Gonecase said...

Arre kahan, aapke saamne to mein bachha hun script writer ji :P

angelodik said...

Ho visitato il tuo blog ed ho apprezzato soprattutto le immagini. Complimenti sei veramente bravo.Spero tu voglia visitare anche il mio blog FOTOGRAFOLAVITA. Te ne sono grato e ti Auguro un Felice Anno Nuovo!! Angelo.

crasiezt said...

Saale taunt maarta hai???Grrrrrrrrrrrr

Gonecase said...

Angelo:
Grazie per la volontà, a mantenere la visita! E felice anno nuovo a voi troppo !!

Gonecase said...

Crazy:
Taunt nahi mara, mazak kar rha tha, par waise baat to sach hai na, aap script writer aur mein ek adna sa engineer

crasiezt said...

Why the humility Sidu? You know you write well..Talent doesn't depend upon your profession. Creativity is above such trivial matters:-)

Gonecase said...

Crazy:
I know talent doesn't depend upon your profession, I was joking with my previous statement. But if your profession depends upon your talent, then its fun and that's what I was conveying :-)
I wish I was that lucky !!

crasiezt said...

Point taken..it ain't about luck though..

Gonecase said...

Agree, but luck plays its part too !!

crasiezt said...

Nope it doesn't..at least it didn't in my case..you've got to take the right decisions thats all..

Hope said...

Hey,

I think soon a book would be published on your blogs....
I liked the pic....

Cheers [:)]

Gonecase said...

Crazy:
Circumstance naam ki bhi ek cheez hoti hai Crazy ji, even better than SWISS CHEESE :P

Hope:
Yeah, the pic is great, I loved it. And book, tu pagal ho gayi hai ladki

crasiezt said...

I dunno so much about the circustance thing to be honest..maybe that's how it is for you..but for me where I am today is all because of the decisions I took (right or worng immaterial), not because of the situation exisitng at that point.

Gonecase said...

Crazy:
Chalo koi to kuch teer maare :P

Hope said...

Hey, Just a thought the person in this pic who's smoking might by blissed by his ciggeratte....
can u see the way he is making circles of smoke!

Gonecase said...

Ofcourse, the calm on his face says it all :-)

poetic soul said...

life exhaled..!!

ths one was a WOW..

m glad u passed me yo blog page.. :)
thnxx man.. keep penning...

Gonecase said...

Thanks a lot, I'm honoured :)