A matchstick stroke
A puff disappearing
Dissolving slowly
in the air
Losing existence
taking something
along with
Long weak threads
Linking life
and beyond
A dot of fire
dazing and fazing
gorging on time
Bitterness inhaled
Life exhaled
Thursday, December 27, 2007
Tranquility
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This is your best post till date...
sends the message out...loud and clear! Taaliyan!
oh and yeah... MF!
Phoonk phoonk phoonk de re phoonk de re..hehehe..that is exactly what you're trying to advocate against..but shameless pigs like me don't ever get the point, do they?
As always, loved the post. Loved the style. Loved the end.."Bitterness inhaled..life exhaled" Awesome. Killer end. Totally inspiring!
amazing picture and an even better poem to go with it
gonecase ji ab to entry de hi dijiye apne prestigious fan club me entry humein :)
kudos u rock!!
#umang# :)
by the way it was just "smoking" ;) :P :P
Skeety:
Oh ! thank you, am honoured :-)
Crazy:
Thank you so much and inspiring, I wish it was :|
Umang:
Thank you ji and fan club, kyon maze leti hai, fan club to tera hona chahiye, mein is layak kahan
Inspiring maane you're inspiring me towards the poetic world baby:D What were you hoping for eh?
Aah, that way! I thought it was about leaving the stick and so, hopeless situation. But yahan to context hi doosra tha. Chalo fir to I'm honoured by this statement of yours. But what I really wanted was what I thought first :|
i never imagined you will write on this too
I know what you want, and you know my response too darling..toh what's the point in pursuing something that you'll never achieve? Come out of your utopian state..this is how it's gonna be..suttebaaz bewdi me is here to stay:D
Chacha:
Seems it came as a shock to you
Crazy:
Am I even trying, naah ! And that is why I said hopeless situation. Desi bhasha mein bole to, mein usse hi bolta hun jise bolne ka kuch fayda ho
You seem pissed mister..the situation isn't all that bad, you know that. Phir gham kahe ka jaani?
Pissed, not at all and am sorry if I made it sound that way. I know that situation isn't that bad and am happy about it.
Then am happy too:D
Aila ! Ye kahan se aaya :P
Aapki khushi mein hi hamari khushi hai ji, hehehe
GC:Yeah kind of surprised, but anyways, agree with most what exactly u mean by "bitterness inhaled"? pointing to the taste itself (nicotine) or sth else?
and what does it take it with itself dear
"taking something
along with"
.. the game it plays with yr mind, the fool it make it out of yrself more than compensate
"khushfahmi mein hi khushi hai, to khushfahmi sahi"
Great reads here. Enjoyed reading ur poetry.
Cheesy corny line that was:P
Bitterness inhaled
Life exhaled
:) and still they say life's beautiful :)You write amazingly well!! take me in ur fan club too,... please please!!
Chacha:
Wo to mujhe pata hi tha ki teri taraf se advocacy hi honi hai.
Second, taking something alongwith refers to taking minutes out of your life.
Butterfly:
Welcome, thanks and keep visiting :-)
Crazy:
Bus ji seekh rahe hain, tips and tricks of the trade :P
Soup:
Oh ! Thank you very much for the honour, keep visiting. And fan club, hehe, am not worth it
nope i was not advocating, just wanted to know what you are worried about most, some minute of your life (as you said), lack of control on you, the reason for which you are smoking OR what?
just curious to know :D
though, it would not be right for me to say against too, "don't preach what you cannot follow" my policy
Hehehe, got your policy and point sir. And about worrying, neither of them because its not applicable to me :P
Seekhne ko bacha kya hai??? You were born corny my love:D
Arre kahan, aapke saamne to mein bachha hun script writer ji :P
Ho visitato il tuo blog ed ho apprezzato soprattutto le immagini. Complimenti sei veramente bravo.Spero tu voglia visitare anche il mio blog FOTOGRAFOLAVITA. Te ne sono grato e ti Auguro un Felice Anno Nuovo!! Angelo.
Saale taunt maarta hai???Grrrrrrrrrrrr
Angelo:
Grazie per la volontà , a mantenere la visita! E felice anno nuovo a voi troppo !!
Crazy:
Taunt nahi mara, mazak kar rha tha, par waise baat to sach hai na, aap script writer aur mein ek adna sa engineer
Why the humility Sidu? You know you write well..Talent doesn't depend upon your profession. Creativity is above such trivial matters:-)
Crazy:
I know talent doesn't depend upon your profession, I was joking with my previous statement. But if your profession depends upon your talent, then its fun and that's what I was conveying :-)
I wish I was that lucky !!
Point taken..it ain't about luck though..
Agree, but luck plays its part too !!
Nope it doesn't..at least it didn't in my case..you've got to take the right decisions thats all..
Hey,
I think soon a book would be published on your blogs....
I liked the pic....
Cheers [:)]
Crazy:
Circumstance naam ki bhi ek cheez hoti hai Crazy ji, even better than SWISS CHEESE :P
Hope:
Yeah, the pic is great, I loved it. And book, tu pagal ho gayi hai ladki
I dunno so much about the circustance thing to be honest..maybe that's how it is for you..but for me where I am today is all because of the decisions I took (right or worng immaterial), not because of the situation exisitng at that point.
Crazy:
Chalo koi to kuch teer maare :P
Hey, Just a thought the person in this pic who's smoking might by blissed by his ciggeratte....
can u see the way he is making circles of smoke!
Ofcourse, the calm on his face says it all :-)
life exhaled..!!
ths one was a WOW..
m glad u passed me yo blog page.. :)
thnxx man.. keep penning...
Thanks a lot, I'm honoured :)
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