"That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons even death may die."
Tear drops on window panein a room of a gloomy houseWhere the shadows are blindlies a mortal, eyes wide openTwo pillows and a sheetand the melancholy of watertearing the heart of skywhat music to a shattered soul
Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh
Finally an update from Mr Superbusy!Orkut kam kar..blog update kiya kar:PI could just see everything you wrote about..so real..so heart breaking..but it's temporary so why fret..in some time there'll be 2 mortals there..and gloom will have to look for a different address:-)Lovely poem of course (what else can I expect from you) and an equally powerful picture to go with it..*claps for the maestro*
kya haal bana rakha hai? kuch lete kyon nai? :P
update after a long long time yaar.good lines!!!
and the melancholy of watertearing the heart of skyThese two lines have an amazing chemistry... welcome back...
Honestly, reading your poems since so long. Its possible that now one can find it a bit cliched or say bit expected. But, your words. Your words make all the difference.The scene may seem to be the same kinda again, but your lines are beautiful and soo profound!! Amazing choice sir!! Really!
yaar...chill...goth is like nice and I like black...and I like your poem to...but trust me...lets write happy stuff..:)Scribblers Inc.
Ethereal.I like it, the picture it paints. It reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe.But most importantly, my brain recognises the atmosphere of the poem.
mate all work n no play makes jack a dull boy......itna kaam mat kiya kar....good to see u update....
beautiful melancholy.. but ya got to be here more often :(:(:(two pillows n a sheet.. i take it as two women n one love ;)is tat y ya aren't here???:)
The end just takes it to greater heights and deeper depths too.Amazing thought.
Check this. I think it might interest you.
back to it..are u..huh
You know you write something.. and then go missing for a month! tch tch.. nahi chalega :P
Dude where are you??!!!You've been tagged...I think you'd find it interesting. Check it out... Bye.
Eyes had run dryBut the skies were still cryingThe winds howling in painHopes were all beatenDark clouds shut the dayAnd lightning kept knocking in vainAm sorry have been back after a long time.. but your words still inspire.. :)
HNMM..therez so much depth in what uve written..nice..:)
hey pal! Where have you been? No updates... Trust all is well. If it work, change your job immediately. LOL.
oh gorgeous...loved it totally!!
please update your readers miss your writings?
strong wordsgood piece
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