Wednesday, November 14, 2007

Final Fall



I try my best to hide
the pain I've inside
will I be fine ???

Being alive is a mistake
my heart begins to ache
is it ok to cry ???

Worst dreams,biggest fears
begin to disappear
is it a sign ???

Will it feel very cold
my body sans soul
the day I'll die ???

31 comments:

crasiezt said...

Looooooooved the picture soooooo much..And yes looooooooved the style of poetry too. All the third lines are just so totally fantabulous:-)

Gonecase said...

Thank you very much ji.It isn't that good yet such words always motivate me to write more and write better, thanks once again :-)

Reeta Skeeter said...

yaar tu ni sudhrega :|
hattttt

Gonecase said...

Hehehe, tune to badi jaldi haar maan li. Arre yaar ye to mera area of specialization hai isliye likhi,nahi to I'm very happy happy :D
baaki recently to maine sab acha acha, I mean on the lighter side hi likha na. Ab skeety naraz ho jayegi to meri hot chocolate ka kya hoga ?? :P

crasiezt said...

Uff what modesty!! Something I could never learn:P

Gonecase said...

Yeah yeah :P

Reeta Skeeter said...

tera area of speciali"z"ation...hmmm... i don't like it. :P US ka angrej hai tu chore... jeeeezzzz!
Haryanvi mein bhi kuch likh...lollllllllllllllll!

Gonecase said...

First piscean,now haryana, what's happening skeety :o
I know you work for HT but ye sab information kahan se nikal rhi hai, skeety has her resources, eh ???
Haryanvi, hmmm, deal...lol :D

Reeta Skeeter said...

Kuch ni kuch ni dar mat...Skeety is an agent of CBI. :P
Lol on a lighter note I was orkutting longgg time back when I had some vella time, so saw ur PP and I was like ye dekhi hui lagti hai... thoda aur jaanch ke baad pata chala wo to tu hai. LOL! Small world.
Oye HT mein ni kaam karti Skeety...tujhe ye kisne kaha?
Haryanvi pucca? Looking fwd!

Gonecase said...

Lol, I knew orkut was involved somehow :P
Par ye to galat baat hai, you know who I am but I don't know who you are, this ain't fair skeety. Nobody told me that you work for HT, mujhe aise hi laga ki you used to work TOI and later you switched to HT,pata nahi kyon :-)

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umangexuberance said...

inne dino bad a sad poem from you..hmm..great as usual, of course with "masterji at work it could be nothing else"

don't hide the pain
like a blundering sea..let it flow
yes you'll be fine
emerging anew
from the pain you drowned in..
the hurt you let slew

correct every slurring mistake
let your heart pump out the ache
yes, its ok to cry
with each tear watch the pain fly

aaah yes, see the signs
watch as the nightmares melt
the fears will be gone
with every scar you ever felt

nay, the cold would be past
the body gone and dead
the soul would be refrshed
calm and cleansed at last
in peace you shall rest

well nothing to what you wrote..but still couldn't stop myself from posting it here :)
and did someone talk about hot chocolate?? *slurpp* meko bhi chiye :|

and haryana..tum bhi?? hehe..where??

and you on orkut too?? good good :D

Gonecase said...

Anu: came, saw, wrote some and deleted, hmmmm..

reeta said...

Lol! Main apna arch rival ko join karne se pehle cynaide khana pasand karungi ji.

reeta said...

@umang and gonecase: Mere pass koi hot choc ka river dikhta hai kya?! :P

umangexuberance said...

@gonecase
sowwy, my friend anu was logged in from my lappy at the time..just took it from her to check your blog and commented, not realizing it was her account from which the comment was getting posted..when i saw that, i deleted the comment and then posted it again from my account..hope u understand :(
tc

@reeta
lolz..but really being dying for a hot chocolate for sometime now..plz plz agar Sid ko milega to mujhe bhi 1 chiye :D :)

Reeta Skeeter said...

@umang: Ye Sid apni hot choc apne aap reserve karke baith gaya hai.LOL. Anyway theek aap dono ko ek ek done... I love sharing the joy of having hot choc with people :) are you from dilli?

umangexuberance said...

@reeta not exactly..but i am staying in gurgaon at the moment (studying :( in the city of malls)
u r in dilli right?
:)

Reeta Skeeter said...

@umang: Right ji :)
@gonecase: Sorry for making your blog a chatroom of sorts...enjoy! :P

Gonecase said...

Reeta, Umang: Baaki replies to baad mein but me too in Delhi, jaldi se hot chocolate ka scene batao :P

Gonecase said...

Umang:Yep, haryana..bhiwani, just in case you know and ofcourse orkut too :D
Poem ka reply a lil bit later :-)

Reeta:Matlab ki abhi bhi TOI, good good...hot choc, river to mujhe chahiye bhi nhi, one glass would do :D

Umang:@Anu - aji koi nahi, inni vaddi gal ni seegi :)

Skeety:O ji welcome hai,apna hi chatroom smjho :D

Reeta Skeeter said...
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umangexuberance said...

@gonecase
of course i have heard of bhivani
ever heard of a place called hissar?? :D
and good u r in delhi so we can get reeta to treat us to that HCF soon :)
i was day dreaming about one during my CAT exam today...mmm...
and i am on orkut too..whts ur id? only if u don't find that question too personal :)

@reeta arre wah..fir to aap padosi hue hmare..ab jaldi se btao kab khila re ho Hot chocolate??

umangexuberance said...

hey!!!
you have been tagged
http://exuberance-umang.blogspot.com/2007/11/fmort.html

Gonecase said...

arre wah..fir to aap padosi hue hmare..:P
And I already had my share, you missed :D ..how was ur CAT btw ??

Orkut, personal, hehehe, its defination says social networking site...here you go:
http://www.orkut.com/Profile.aspx?uid=2498176785603327050

Yep, saw the tag too, thanks

umangexuberance said...

this is not fair dono ki baat
hui thi khane ki ab u'll be punished for it :(
ab aap dono ko meko khilana padega compensation me :P :P :P

Kulpreet said...

Flash! Not all of us can do it so well.
Good going...

Gonecase said...

Umang:Ab koi busy ho to koi kya kare :P
Baaki khilane ka to maine kabhi bhi mana nahi kara :D

Kulpreet: Thnx for the appreciation sir, am honoured

Reeta Skeeter said...

HAHAHA! Sid koi HC ni khata na peeta :P sab bakwass hai :P

umangexuberance said...

haha!!! dnt worry ab to main pakka free rahungi :P :P

@reeta
dekhte hn..hope karne me kya jata h ;)

Gonecase said...

Skeety: Arre itni garmi mein HC !! Moreover abhi peene ki nahi pilane ki baat thi, mein to cold coffee se bhi kaam chala skta hun :D

Umang: Wo to ussi time pata chalega :-)