Wednesday, September 12, 2007

Because I love my Job


A jarred closet beneath
a sheath of cobwebs
lying, dying
eroding, degrading
upon a cranky stool
sits a man waiting
a blank gaze
neural molestation
a raped soul
tortured, slain
a look of disdain
inadvertent trite
poison instilled of
pompous stride
He waits and waits ....

18 comments:

crasiezt said...

After all the molestation, torture and rape, are you alright now?

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

No, am not. I am really sorry for that man. I can't imagine his plight. Will ask and convey your concern to him smartass :P

Moulding defragmentation said...

yes structurally tihs one is different. However try employing a certain economy in the usage of words. For ex. the four words "lying, dying, eroding, degrading" convey the same sense.

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

I tried to ignore economy for the sake of increasing intensity

crasiezt said...

How are you gonna convey "my concern" to him? Can I watch?? LOL

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

I was about to send him an email, am sure you can watch :D

crasiezt said...

You think an email will make a difference to him?? Doesn't he need your "personal" touch?

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Hahaha, good one, seekh rahi hai, shabaash ;-)
No,I am not interested in personal touch, am not Mother Teresa but if you want, I'll arrange a meeting for you.

umangexuberance said...

just one word "WOW"...!!!

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Am honoured !!

crasiezt said...

Why would I be interested in your "maal"???LOL. You can give him all the "personal" stuff you want dude..I just wanna be there to shoot the scene:P

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

My maal, sorry, not interested.I am happy the way I am and what I'm getting, shoot that ;-)

crasiezt said...

PERVERT!!

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Hey bhagwaan, ye bolne se pehle tu goongi kyo nahi ho gyi. Kya din aa gye hain, aaj tere muh se ye sunne ko mila :P

crasiezt said...

COnsidering that what you said was a pathetic PJ, you deserve one in return..
maine bola kahan??sirf likha:P

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

abbe haath nahi rahenge to mera hi to nuksaan hoga ;-)

crasiezt said...

Time to leave the hands behind I think:D

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Yep :D