Wednesday, September 12, 2007

Because I love my Job


A jarred closet beneath
a sheath of cobwebs
lying, dying
eroding, degrading
upon a cranky stool
sits a man waiting
a blank gaze
neural molestation
a raped soul
tortured, slain
a look of disdain
inadvertent trite
poison instilled of
pompous stride
He waits and waits ....

18 comments:

crasiezt said...

After all the molestation, torture and rape, are you alright now?

Gonecase said...

No, am not. I am really sorry for that man. I can't imagine his plight. Will ask and convey your concern to him smartass :P

Moulding defragmentation said...

yes structurally tihs one is different. However try employing a certain economy in the usage of words. For ex. the four words "lying, dying, eroding, degrading" convey the same sense.

Gonecase said...

I tried to ignore economy for the sake of increasing intensity

crasiezt said...

How are you gonna convey "my concern" to him? Can I watch?? LOL

Gonecase said...

I was about to send him an email, am sure you can watch :D

crasiezt said...

You think an email will make a difference to him?? Doesn't he need your "personal" touch?

Gonecase said...

Hahaha, good one, seekh rahi hai, shabaash ;-)
No,I am not interested in personal touch, am not Mother Teresa but if you want, I'll arrange a meeting for you.

umangexuberance said...

just one word "WOW"...!!!

Gonecase said...

Am honoured !!

crasiezt said...

Why would I be interested in your "maal"???LOL. You can give him all the "personal" stuff you want dude..I just wanna be there to shoot the scene:P

Gonecase said...

My maal, sorry, not interested.I am happy the way I am and what I'm getting, shoot that ;-)

crasiezt said...

PERVERT!!

Gonecase said...

Hey bhagwaan, ye bolne se pehle tu goongi kyo nahi ho gyi. Kya din aa gye hain, aaj tere muh se ye sunne ko mila :P

crasiezt said...

COnsidering that what you said was a pathetic PJ, you deserve one in return..
maine bola kahan??sirf likha:P

Gonecase said...

abbe haath nahi rahenge to mera hi to nuksaan hoga ;-)

crasiezt said...

Time to leave the hands behind I think:D

Gonecase said...

Yep :D