Friday, August 24, 2007

Fickle Brain


Sitting alone here in this room
thinking what is wrong with me
When everyone is enjoying the bloom
I am longing to be free

The shackles that hold me here
those shackles are self made
I've chained my mind, my heart
Soul lying on the edge of blade

My existance no longer exists
I'm a living dead piece of meat
I sense no chill in the wind
My body can't feel the heat

I try so hard to hide it
is that what makes it show
They get to meet a happy me
My heart pumps pain with blood flow

But why this self imposed exile
Why when I don't want it
Why this tormenting of myself
This question is endless pit

11 comments:

crasiezt said...

As depressing as depressing can be..completely your style.
"My existance no longer exists
I'm a living dead piece of meat"
Amazing lines...the saving grace of your piece must say! I salute the poet in you:-)

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Crazy- Thanks a lot for the time and comment :P
Does saving grace depicts its that bad that it needed a couple of lines to save it, haha, anyways, I'll take that as a compliment, afterall, I am the one who wrote those lines as well.
Salute,hmmmm...major ka asar hai :)
Thanks a ton, am honoured.

Unknown said...

i wish i can write d way u write!!!
hye u r amazing!!!!!

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Thanks. But am not that good,rather am not good at all. You have limited exposure tabhi aisa bol rhi hai, haha

crasiezt said...

Shit!! That's so totally not what I meant..I guess kisi dhakkan ka asar ho raha hai:D *will tell you whom am referring to when we meet!*

That stuff was good dude. Just that those lines were the best. Chocolate icing on a chocolate cake..delicious and sinful!

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

If
{
dhakkan == tubelight
}
printf("I know whom you are referring to");
else
printf("Tell me about it");

P.S.: Chocolate...you made me hungry :P

crasiezt said...

Gonecase you're a complete gonecase..how could you not get that clue:-/ And chocolates reminded me of something...

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Now I know, thanks to you.
Regards :P

crasiezt said...

The pleasure is all mine:P

Gonecase aka. Shutter Singh said...

Ofcourse, it has to be yours, I'm not interested in regards. I'm straight :P

crasiezt said...

I know what you're interested in Gonecase..and thank god it's not "regards" LOL