Wednesday, July 25, 2007


I have been observing a consistent decline in my IQ lately which is quite disturbing. I wonder if it can have a negative value. Bear with it till you can. One more TAJ MAHAL of poor poetry:

Oh yeah,I am me !
Why should I pretend,
what I can't be !!

Is it ineluctable,
to act normal !
I hate you all,
why being formal !!

Living in this world,
devoid of life !
Goring someone with,
blunt edge of knife !!

Full of filth from,
sepulcher nearby !
Gazing at death's
charms by the sly !!

Cold and freezing,
rime of grime !
waiting for something,
shrill and sublime !!


Reeta Skeeter said...
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Reeta Skeeter said...

oho I donno wot I wrote uffff...poor memoryy... ok writing it again... I like th Taj Mahal of poor poetry.. put the pic NO...Jeeezzzzz!!

Gonecase said...

awww, he is shoo cute :P
(Darn, I hate this line)
Thanks a lot, would try to improve !
Property n

Anonymous said...

Hi Gonecase,

Good name, if i can say that.
Great poem. Enjoyed!

Reeta Skeeter said...

neva mind i blog even wen i am sleepy and hence become the queen of typos :P

Gonecase said...

Thanks Kulpreet. I am glad that you enjoyed it :)
Ms. Skeeter, that's a talent in itself :P