Saturday, June 2, 2007

Nobody


Have you ever felt
being a nobody

Have you ever dealt
the words they say
the melting of mind
the moral fray

When nobody likes
being with you
When everybody avoids
being seen wih you

Have you ever felt
being a nobody

Have you ever seen
the hate in their eyes
When nobody understands
your pain, your plight

When nobody wants
to talk to you
When nobody is there
to walk with you

Have you ever felt
being a nobody

18 comments:

~~lily~~ said...

more thn the words i like ur thots...

Gonecase said...

Thoughts evolve from heart while words are generated from mind, maybe that's why !!!

Anonymous said...

yup i hav felt being NOBODY wen i was ditched by sumone.. but hav u ever felt d way u hav written ?

Anonymous said...

hey man u rite so wel

i also tried my luck at writin .. but me not dat gud nice thots i hv becum fan of ur poems let's b frnz

Gonecase said...

Felt the way I've written, still feeling it,feel it everyday, these are not poems, these are wht I experience

Anonymous said...

hey why did u feel dat way well i hv shared why i feel n felt dat way ... wht bt u ??? can we b frnz??

Gonecase said...

Sure, we can be fnds but why this anonymous mask !!
Why I feel this way, well no ditching for me, never had anyone to ditch me

Anonymous said...

so why did u felt dat way

Anonymous said...

so u hv experienced al d stuff u hv written .. ur life had been tragic i feel..u didn't reply why did u feel dat way?

Gonecase said...

This is not the right place to discuss this thing, scrap me on orkut at http://www.orkut.com/Home.aspx?xid=17369293833041715810
if you use it.

Anonymous said...

hey no orkut is too public.. i think dis is d rite place to discus al dis stuf tel me na

Gonecase said...

I never had anyone to accompany me, either I was wrong or everyone else was. Maybe, I am different or abnormal, as they say.
Its been a lonely road for me...

priyanka said...

I like your poems...'m not a good writer but what i can say is: you are a gem....the way you write truths of life in a simple language is commendable...
Know Sid...everyone in his or her life many times feel the same what you have written..
Hey, know the way you have beautified your blogs..is awesome...
Hats off to ur creativity.

Anonymous said...

i've felt being nobody...but not evryday..can i ask u y do u feel dis way??? wats wrong???dont you have friends

Gonecase said...
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Gonecase said...

I have friends but no one is with me these days :(
But this has got nothing to do with the friends,its how life treats you

Priya said...

Have you ever felt like nobody?
Like a speck of dust in the air,
When everyone is around you,
And you are just not there!!!

Gonecase said...

Speck of dust,that's novel;Great way to look at it,thanks.